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Boys don't Cry

Published: Jul 21, 2017

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Description

you could've dismissed him... He was just an exhibition, but something inside of you was telling you he meant more than that.

you felt you could resonate with him but you couldn't quiet understand why you felt that way you just didn't want him to cry again.

So you pressed your hand on the cold hard glass to let him know that you were there with him. Waiting for him to open his eyes.
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- my oc

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lili-tomato

Aug 22, 2017

Well, the concept is good, the character is well done, but the animation is kind of robotic, you need to add more movement to his body, and even hair, in my opinion, you need to add more frames, but keep up the good work, it's not that bad really.
Overall you have a great potential, you just need to work more on it